A rather long-winded tag-line, not immediately apparent, required some thought which maybe was too in-depth and implied. Appreciate the tagline was implying good sleep from their journeys/planes, however I thought red-eye was more to do with photography, not lack of sleep. Also doesn’t address inherent jet-lag issue. For the confusing messages, I’ve given this tagline only 2 line notches.
What do you think?